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                                                                     a poem for Jack Parsons

Lucifer took a hit, landed
face-down & flat-broke
back in the 40s
out on the West Coast
eyes the colour of Swarfega
teeth rotting, shoes worn through,
and dying for another high

too early for acid he takes
the mescaline trail
down into the Mojave
where the rattlesnakes are
locked in their kundalini and the
stillness flickers like god
across a lizard's eye

Lucifer hitched a ride
(another genius-bum)
over to Pasadena
to see Jack and the Rocket Boys
see what they can do
to put him back in heaven

too long in the desert
Jack's already on the last reel
stopped in a single frame,
trapped in the gate
the lamp thinks it's fission, emulsion
chars and blisters

Lucifer changed his name
to Phosphorus (same deal)
burned white, burned right out
end of the 60s

(Jack, one last jump cut:
Lunar 37° 18′ 0″ N, 171° 12′ 0″ W (37.3°, -171.2°):
on the dark side and for you
a crater yawns itself
into a busted mouth)
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~anapests-and-ink Dec 26, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
I can't even put into words how deep and striking this is.
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Nicely bloody done! Put it to music, get Aerosmith to play it and you've got a #1 on your hands!
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~breezybrutality Apr 25, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
So fast! I loved the journey.
Jack Parsons is now one of the most envied people alive haha
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:iconbotkin:
Thank you all for your kind comments.
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:iconhryllingur:
I love the way this reads. It's... it's just GOOD in the way that poetry is.
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~FirstSarge Apr 25, 2012  Professional Writer
DAMN!
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=TristanCody Apr 25, 2012  Student Writer
Unique and powerful. I loved your imagery and your use of not only language but of statistics and numbers.

This was very raw and fresh piece that brought a lot of light to my day and I thank you!

- Tristan Cody.
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Mood: Love ~LFBeta16 Apr 25, 2012   General Artist
o___o That's interesting.
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`FractalEyes Apr 25, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
"Freedom is a Two-Edged Sword"
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*xlntwtch Apr 25, 2012   Writer
A fine piece. Congratulations on the DD. The imagery is used wonderfully, and the progression new and fresh. Thank you.
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